Carmen had always been the most reserved of
the four Duke sisters. Everyone in town knew that family, as they owned almost
everything around those parts. Apparently, the great-grandfather had been the
one to first set foot in the region, before mining teams settled too and the
small town of Golden River was founded. What made them rich, of course, was
gold. The Duke family became rich in a glimpse and now every person in town
felt that family owned them.
Deluded by his power, the leader of the family
had always thought the people of Golden River adored him and his family. But
Barnaby Duke was not loved but despised and I was all a really good acting
scene, as the inhabitants of the small town preferred to avoid conflict that
basically shooting themselves on the foot. It was the Duke family that gave
them the jobs on which they based their survival, so any words against them
wouldn’t be precisely wise. So lies settled in town.
What was worse, Mr. Duke loved to give
speeches every so often: on the first day of spring for example. It didn’t
matter if it was raining like crazy, he made people reunite in the town’s
square and talked for hours about how in Golden River people lived a better
life than in other places. He had a point, as they had never starved or
anything like that. Meanwhile, many other towns in the country were suffering
and had been going through very tough times for at least ten years.
As good as he portrayed himself to be, Barnaby
Duke had instructed the mayor and the police, a group of less than five people,
to stop any outsiders from settling in Golden River. They had to ask it
formally first and the requests were mostly denied. That’s why no one really
knew about what was going on in other places. They were shielded from
everything that way. Gold was the only trade they had and it was done by the
Duke family, so none of the workers had the need to travel beyond the forest.
But even so, people hated the Dukes. They
hated the pompous Barnaby and his stuffy wife Henrietta, who was rarely seen in
town. And of course, his daughters were beyond despised because he exhibited
them around, like prizes, wearing all the best but never letting them interact
with anyone from town. The people despised the girls for perpetuating the wrong
his father had done, paying them miserably. They knew their dresses and
perfumes would have made Golden River a better town. But they decided hate was
the way to go because they had nothing else.
There’s where Carmen comes in. She was the
youngest of her sisters, maybe the most beautiful of them all. Her elder sister
Diana was getting ready to leave town, as she had been promised in marriage to
a rich merchant with whom her father had business with. The man was much older
than her and even so she was beaming with joy, as she was leaving town forever
in order to have, what she thought, was a much better life, filled with
excitement and many things to discover.
Carmen was a bit jealous of her sister but
only because she was leaving town, the first one of the sisters to do so. It
was obvious that they would all leave sooner that later, as they were all
getting close to the marrying age. Diana was sixteen and Colleen was fifteen.
Then Marguerite was fourteen and, finally, Carmen was only thirteen. Few years
under her belt but she was the most adventurous one, always curious about the
world around her. She was the least loved one too, by her father.
Her mother was largely absent. She had not
raised them as such, the job having been assigned to a number of servants. They
were the only family to have nannies and cooks in town, which made people hate
them even more. Nevertheless, those servants loved the girls and had learned to
teach them the things they needed to know in order to be good wives in the
future. But that wasn’t enough for Carmen, who often left the house to walk
around the woods, and even to the mine.
She liked to watch the men coming in and out
of there. They looked different in the morning and then in the afternoon, all
covered in dust and dirt. She also visited the ones that worked in the river,
looking for gold there. She would always walk at a safe distance, because she
was a bit scared of all those men and women. They appeared to be suffering and
she inferred that because of the facial expression they had. She was the first
to learn how much people hated the Dukes.
Not that anyone did anything to her; she just
knew it one day. Her sisters left, with the passing of time. One day, waving
goodbye to Marguerite, she realized how little time she had left there. Her
parents had not chosen a suitor yet but the decision would be announced any day
now. She didn’t wanted marriage or leave Golden River, even if people hated
them. Carmen felt she could help them have a better life, maybe better
conditions at work. She had spent so much time watching and hearing them, that
she thought she knew what was best for them.
Silly as she was, Carmen walked to her father
one day and told him she would like to work with him, handling the family
business. The only answer she got was a slap on the face, one so hard her
father’s ring left a mark on her cheek. He didn’t say a word after hitting her,
calling one of the servants and telling them to lock Carmen in her room. Her
wound was not even taken care of. It was then she realized the hate that people
had against them was justified and she hated herself for who she was.
Alone and locked away, she felt herself sink
into an abyss. The following day it was her mother who visited her. That never
happened, as the woman was always busy trying new clothes and stuff she bought
from the city. She entered the room, visibly having never been there. It seemed
she was going to sit on the bed but, instead, she just said a suitor had been
found and her marriage was settled to happen in just a couple of months. The
man was elderly but extremely wealthy.
That night, a storm broke over the small town.
Rain and wind hit all the houses, making the windows crack and the doors
tremble. Carmen had cried so much that she had fallen asleep as she was, on her
bed. But the storm woke her up in the middle of the night and gave her an idea.
The noise was so strong that no one heard when she broke the window. She
removed almost all of her clothes, to be able to move faster, and just like
that, she jumped outside and ran towards town.
The idea behind what she had done was that
someone there could help her escape her father, maybe giving her a horse to
ride to her freedom. But when she got to the small town, she realized people
were asleep and none was there to help her. Then, she did something very
stupid: assuming no one would notice, she grabbed a horse from a stable and
just tried to ride it. The horse didn’t let that happen and dropped her to the
round. The racket attracted the owners to the scene.
When they realized who the burglar was, their
rage seemed to reach new levels. In their eyes, their owner was mocking them,
sending his daughter to steal from them. So they did the only thing that made
sense to them and that they wanted to do: they killed Carmen Duke.
Soon, an angry mob was formed. They had grown
tired and the intrusion of the Duke girl had been the last hey would take from
the oppressor. So that stormy night, they marched straight to the Duke house
and set it on fire. Everyone inside was killed in the sleep. There were Dukes
no more.